Ce serait très utile que vous nous proposiez des changements linguistiques, si vous pouviez nous préparer un document clair; en trois ou quatre paragraphes, aux pages 1, 2, 4, 10, 12, ou peu importe—non, la page 12 donne une interprétation de la page 13, sauf erreur.
It would be very helpful if you would give us the alternate language, if you would write us a document that was clear, just in the three or four paragraphs you pointed out to us, on page 1, 2, 4, 10, 12, whatever it was—no, page 12 was an interpretation of page 13, if I remember correctly.